Kangaroos jump
With its joey in the pouch
Hopping from hunters
Hopping from hunters
Spider on the webHunting for delicious food
What luck! Bugs crawling
Zebra in the zooFeeding on some lovely grass
Happy with their feed
by Huy Eric Rhino O - 9 years old
Illustrated drawings:
Kangaroo :http://www.how-to-draw-funny-cartoons.com/cartoon-kangaroo.html
Zebra and spider: http://www.google.com/imgres?imgurl=http://www.timtim.com/public/images/drawings/large/001461_Zebra.gif&imgrefurl=http://www.timtim.com/drawing/view/drawing_id/1461&h=544&w=545&sz=29&tbnid=WKJQjXhHFrNn2M:&tbnh=133&tbnw=133&prev=/images%3Fq%3Ddrawing%2Bof%2Bzebra&hl=en&usg=__WSp9cciB0Hk8ulhHRmlPg6_8xf0=&ei=qtqMSvyKJpSssgP4obnyCQ&sa=X&oi=image_result&resnum=6&ct=image
Illustrated drawings:
Kangaroo :http://www.how-to-draw-funny-cartoons.com/cartoon-kangaroo.html
Zebra and spider: http://www.google.com/imgres?imgurl=http://www.timtim.com/public/images/drawings/large/001461_Zebra.gif&imgrefurl=http://www.timtim.com/drawing/view/drawing_id/1461&h=544&w=545&sz=29&tbnid=WKJQjXhHFrNn2M:&tbnh=133&tbnw=133&prev=/images%3Fq%3Ddrawing%2Bof%2Bzebra&hl=en&usg=__WSp9cciB0Hk8ulhHRmlPg6_8xf0=&ei=qtqMSvyKJpSssgP4obnyCQ&sa=X&oi=image_result&resnum=6&ct=image
5 comments:
Ha ha haaaa... tho Haiku cua Po sao giong No qua ! Ca dut ca dut vi co mau tieu lam in hit No va bo En.
Nguoi lam sao chiem bao lam vay !
Thuong No nhieu lam.
Bac Lien
Hi Rhino
Your Haiku poem is perfect in both form and ideas. I love your animal world. It's free from dangers and there's plenty of food.
Can I visit it some day?
Bac Khanh
Hi Rhino,
Nice work! I like the sense of reality in your poem: hunters and bugs chasing their preys in the first 2 cases (kangaroos and spiders). But with the zebra: humans are the ones who put zebra in the zoo for us to see. Shouldn't they be allowed to roam freely in their own environment? what do you think?
Co nho.c
Ca? nha` Houston da~ doc bai` vie^t' cua? Rhino , thang` nay` co' ve~ la` ho*i nghie^ng ve^` 1 nha` nghie^n cu*u' chang???( gio^ng' ai???)
Rhino, u are the Best ! i'm so pound of u ! Keep going ....ok????
Bac Thai
Nhu vay la thang No mang gene cua Bac Thanh bac Khanh nua do nhe… Con wa gioi Bac Hoa khong ngac nhien chut nao :)
Bac Hoa
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