Aug 19, 2009

HAIKU - Doan Quoc Huy Eric


Kangaroos jump
With its joey in the pouch
Hopping from hunters


 Spider on the web
 Hunting for delicious food
 What luck! Bugs crawling
Zebra in the zoo
Feeding on some lovely grass
Happy with their feed





by Huy Eric Rhino O - 9 years old

Illustrated drawings:
Kangaroo :http://www.how-to-draw-funny-cartoons.com/cartoon-kangaroo.html
Zebra and spider: http://www.google.com/imgres?imgurl=http://www.timtim.com/public/images/drawings/large/001461_Zebra.gif&imgrefurl=http://www.timtim.com/drawing/view/drawing_id/1461&h=544&w=545&sz=29&tbnid=WKJQjXhHFrNn2M:&tbnh=133&tbnw=133&prev=/images%3Fq%3Ddrawing%2Bof%2Bzebra&hl=en&usg=__WSp9cciB0Hk8ulhHRmlPg6_8xf0=&ei=qtqMSvyKJpSssgP4obnyCQ&sa=X&oi=image_result&resnum=6&ct=image

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5 comments:

  1. AnonymousAugust 21, 2009 at 6:19 PM

    Ha ha haaaa... tho Haiku cua Po sao giong No qua ! Ca dut ca dut vi co mau tieu lam in hit No va bo En.
    Nguoi lam sao chiem bao lam vay !
    Thuong No nhieu lam.
    Bac Lien

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  2. Hot...August 23, 2009 at 7:03 AM

    Hi Rhino
    Your Haiku poem is perfect in both form and ideas. I love your animal world. It's free from dangers and there's plenty of food.
    Can I visit it some day?
    Bac Khanh

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  3. Hot...August 23, 2009 at 2:51 PM

    Hi Rhino,
    Nice work! I like the sense of reality in your poem: hunters and bugs chasing their preys in the first 2 cases (kangaroos and spiders). But with the zebra: humans are the ones who put zebra in the zoo for us to see. Shouldn't they be allowed to roam freely in their own environment? what do you think?
    Co nho.c

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  4. Hot...August 24, 2009 at 3:03 PM

    Ca? nha` Houston da~ doc bai` vie^t' cua? Rhino , thang` nay` co' ve~ la` ho*i nghie^ng ve^` 1 nha` nghie^n cu*u' chang???( gio^ng' ai???)

    Rhino, u are the Best ! i'm so pound of u ! Keep going ....ok????

    Bac Thai

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  5. Hot...August 24, 2009 at 10:23 PM

    Nhu vay la thang No mang gene cua Bac Thanh bac Khanh nua do nhe… Con wa gioi Bac Hoa khong ngac nhien chut nao :)

    Bac Hoa

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